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The Great and Powerful by Don-ko The Great and Powerful by Don-ko
ALL OF SUDDEN topless version here in my scraps [link]

Well, I wanted to draw something like a sexy female, a human and Trixie at the same time, so here it is, human version of The Great and Powerful Trixie!

It's actually my first public attempt of drawing human (old stuff in my gallery can hardly be called humans), So, the first pancake is always a mess, so I want some critiques to this picture. Please note - non constructive 5 star critiques will not be posted.

Special thanks for Spotty the Cheetah for his advises!

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Okay, first time writing a critique here, but I think I know enough to write one, thanks to an art class that I have taken in college.

Anywho, let's get down to business. This picture is, in fact, a very original piece in the sense that humanoid versions of Trixie (or in this case, Sexie) are quite rare. The style you used for this artwork is very unique, definitely more crisp and detailed than most of your others. The shading, to me, seems pretty spot on, especially around her arms and the garment that she is sitting on.

One particular detail that I find most interesting, even though it isn't too noticeable, is the fact that you still enabled us to see the entire moon even though only a fraction of it is lit up. I don't really see that too often whenever people draw moons. Very nice.

Your style of smoke is also pretty slick. I can tell that you put quite some effort into it.

All in all, this is probably one of my most favorite pictures that you have ever submitted, if not the best.

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I wanted to draw something like a sexy female, a human and Trixie at the same time
I'd say you succeeded with flying colors good sir. All my money to see Seth's reaction to this, I hope you've tossed an email up to the EqD blog, even if it doesn't make it into a drawfriend (or it's own post for that matter).

You've included several homages to the show - the clouds, Trixie's coat color as her uniform, her cape & hat and of course the stage - they all fit very well together. The proportions are nicely handled, and the foreshortening on her feet looks quite natural given her pose.

Alas, you've requested critique and there are some very minor points that do catch my eye in this stellar work. You tend to favor a bit more of a jagged style, and I feel that revels itself a it too prominently in her face, particularly in her chin and lower eye makeup. While the remainder of her body is exceptionally smooth, making reference to the show imho, her face stands in contrast.

One other effect I've been a bit picky about in the past on other artists' work is an iris outline. The show avoids the outline and I feel it would have worked better in your work to avoid it as well because it makes the character feel a little less 3D. In general I feel the outline a real eye is only slightly noticeable and including it in an artistic work makes the eye seem more like it is not actually spherical rather than appearing more realistic.

There are a couple lines that jump out at me. One is the junction of the inner rim of the hat which is almost touching her hair. The line indicating the inner rim from the back of the hat overlays the line from the front inner rim, making it feel like the rat has a piece of fabric hanging down in the back. I think if you extended the front line rather than the back line, it would better show the front rim is closer to the viewer than the back rim (much like you did on the other side of the hat near her ear - the front line is extended to show that the front is closer to the viewer). I also feel her cleavage has a very small oddly-placed line. While typicaly works may sport the 'Y' juncture, your work is at a lower angle and at a greater rotated angle (she's not strictly facing the camera). When I use my cursor to cover up the short line extending from the juncture of her breasts on the left side, her body feels more natural. Imagining that line in reality gives her some oddly shaped appendages, and I think you're better off simply removing the line.

Perhaps one other point - her thigh in the foreground feels a tad thick - about three times the diameter of her forearm, making her seem a tad chubby (I'd estimate about 2-2.5 times is more typical). I'm not sure if that may have been your intent as it's rather minor, but I draw your attention to it as it seemed to be due to more than her leg simply being in the foreground and thus being larger.

:) Overall a very nice detailed work, the shines are a cute touch, as are the sheen on (what I presume is) her latex outfit - they really make this piece professional. Keep up the awesome work :thumbsup:
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BlackEyesBlue Featured By Owner May 22, 2014
Watching... IN AWE!!  0_0
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:iconrserp8:
rserp8 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
You. Me. Bed. Now.
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RainbowDash420 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013
i want this on my car
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General-Spitfire32 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmm, she figured out a way to boost profit in human world.
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Botboy41 Featured By Owner May 30, 2013
O.O WOW Traixe has Nver Look's So Beautifuly Sexy, I LOVE THSI SO MUCH

(Oh God, Nose Bleed)
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SifuScott Featured By Owner May 23, 2013
Nice! Reminds me of the TV show Bewitched.
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Darkhellion2 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
Very nice human Trixie! Nice curves, good coloring, long legs, amazing rack, etc. She reminds of a stripper the way she is portrayed here. I'm not saying it's a bad thing; merely an opinion.
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Thejboy88 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013
I don't know why, but for some reason I find girl who I know to be unpleasant really sexy.
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linas3001 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's not uncommon
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TheRockinStallion Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'd hit the hay with that!!!
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Dorothy64116 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
Trixie: You wolf whistling at me because I'm that sexy?
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Dorothy64116 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012
Twilight Sparkle: Trixie, you're showing your boobs.
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Dorothy64116 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
I could wolf whistle when she's dressed like that, because girls like being wolf whistled.
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gonzo22 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
The Sexy and Beautiful Trixie nice job
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CaptainPrower Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Funny, I didn't know Trixie was also a stripper.
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evilhamsterzzz Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012
I Approve!
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superpika293 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'd watch her bitch at me if I got to see her in that. It'd be worth it.
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dmancool2010 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012
:iconwhoaplz: Neo approves.
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oldfokk Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012
whoa..!
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Rezzap Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012
Awesome! :3
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the-derp-man24 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012
because boobies.
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JeffTheWolfSage Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
SEXIEST MLP HUMAN EVER
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Abramus5250 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012
I wouldn't mind being her assistant, if you know what I mean...
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Mannyworverine Featured By Owner May 29, 2012
Wow the human form of trixie looks almost looks like charmcaster from ben 10
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Xamanos Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012
The Great, Powerful and Sexy Trixie!
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:iconpharmmajor:
pharmmajor Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012
Very nice. It's got a cool Bruce Timm style to it that I really enjoy.
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Don-ko Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I have no idea who is this guy
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livvielynne Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012
u drew TRIXIE THE SHOW OFF FROM THE EPISODES
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yoyododo1990 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
Great drawing! Have you ever considered doing a Discorded version of her? I don't think that anyone did a human Discorded Trixie yet! Could be interesting! [link] & [link]
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ACEnBEAKY Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012
I must say her figure is quite alluring. Her hips and butt are amazing.
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Lt-C0l0N3l Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
'Quite'?
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ACEnBEAKY Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
Yes, yes my bad.
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Lt-C0l0N3l Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
'Unbelievably' is the real word. You silly filly!
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Dante8411 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2012
My Little Stage: Egotism is Magic
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Lt-C0l0N3l Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012
She looks so hot, I-I... :onfire: Owhowhow!!!!!
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Lt-C0l0N3l Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012
I'd only see her magic if the show was like this...
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You shoot me? You just entered a toaster, and I'm the heating filament, asshole.
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PluckyNinja Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
I really dig this! I love Trixie, and she looks like the sexy minx that she should. Well done. :D
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Treizar Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011
"The GREAT and POWERFUL Trixie!"

More like the FAKE and FRAUDULENT Trixie. Still, great work!
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Wolvenfire86 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011
Mmmmmm. Trixie. I got a magic wand right now, and it's no illusion.
lolololol
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SpazJackrabbit1 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Student General Artist
:iconvegetaplz::iconsaysplz: ITS OVER 900!!!
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Lt-C0l0N3l Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012
What, 900? That can't be right! It's supposed to be OVER 9000!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Voladrios Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012
vegeta: its 1006....
nappa: wha... rlly?
vegeta: YEAH GOT KICK HER ASS
*2 minutes later of nappa getting beat up*
vegeta: NAPPA WAIT!
nappa: WHAAAAAT!?!?
vegeta: i had the scouter upside down.... its over 9000.... rah.
nappa: WELL YOU DONT SEEM REALLY SUPRISED?!
vegeta: becuz its still not a threat...
nappa: bu-
vegeta: To me! (if you get that reference, you are awesome)
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kusairo-sama Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011
You're art style is great and to say the first pancake is always a mess... i'd have to say that this is not the first ^^
If i were to have a problem with it, it's just that the way she is dressed makes her seem that she is more like a magicians assistant or a burlesque dancer using awesome effects. other than that great job and hope to see more, i couldn't hit the fave button fast enough XD
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Phantasis Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Oh la la!
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RAGINGWALRUS Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011
WING
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BONER:
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Cyber-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2011
:iconmegustaplz:
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gaara-n-hinata09 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2011
I just gazmed on my computer... and I'm not afraid to admit it.
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Wesdaaman Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2011  Student General Artist
TRRRRIIIIIIIIIIIIIXXXIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEE
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littleponyknight Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2011  Student Artist
nosebleed of death!
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Septic-Art Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
greatest trick ever.
I see that she's also leveled-up to Level 4 Boobmage!
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