XJ9 Livestreamed

Alrighty, let's break this down the way dA wants me to.

Vision: I take it you just wanted to portray Jenny in your own stlye. In that regard this piece is a complete sucess. The overall composition is impressive, and the presentation is wonderful.

Originality: Seeing as this is an "unoriginal" character, but portrayed in your own stylization, I must say that the design is very original. You've definitely made her even more human-esque than her original portrayal.

Technique: The lineart on this is fantastic. Clean, balanced, and smooth. The lighting and shading is also commendable, adding a metallic look to much of the body. The use of the fire for contrast on the body is also a very nice touch.

Impact: This show was a very big part of my later-childhood. Seeing it re-invisioned in a more mature way is very appealing to me.

Composition: The piece is a little unbalanced. All my focus is towards the right, seeing as XJ9 is on the left side of the piece. The typography needs a bit more emphasis to balance the piece out more. The background is incredibly complex, and I absolutely adore it. The design is very unique, and a little entrancing to look at.

Complaints: There isn't enough contrast between XJ9 and the background. They're both of extremely similar, if not identical color palattes. The background shouldbe of a more red-orange color to accent the greens in her hair and clothing.

Personal Notes: I love the semi-redesign of XJ9. It's, as stated, more mature and quite cute.