Sushi for Ben

This work of art is nice and there are plenty of good parts to admire. But the blinding effect on her lips kinda draws most of the attention. And as the shading and background itself ads more to the picture. I think the stance you've chosen has been done a bit to much. I also have too point out that the way her left arm is presented it makes her look a bit muscular. With that said, it would make you wonder if you were going for an ecchie look or a muscular ecchie look. All in the end. B+